First draft: The Introduction

We could protect ourselves from criminals by admitting that they are same with us.

Maybe the viewer think that this thesis is quite crazy or wrong. But I want to persuade you guys with my reasons. Almost people think that criminals are all psychos so there are no reasons that they do the crime. But there are various reasons. The most effective reason is the financial problem. Also the another reason is that the environment surrounding them considers them psychos making them hostile for the world. They were also people who are same with us and there is way to back them be the normal people. That way is understanding them and admitting that they are same with us. Don't be hostile for them, Now, find the reasons and ways in a calm and orderly way.