The confirmation.

1. What is my thesis?
we can protect ourselves from criminals by admitting that they are same with us. 

 2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I use the famous sites' article and expert's mention. Also the public sites' dictionary is used.

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are based on the logic. I have both evidence and emotion. So I can connect these evidences and emotions logically. 

My Confirmation

 It's the controversial thesis. Crime is already issued in the real world, and there are many criminal dramas such as the criminal mind and the Mentalist. It could be hard to persuade the people that the criminals are same with us. But I think I could do with my logical reasons. First of all, victims, namely the normal people, feel the scared and the frightened when they meet the criminals. This phenomenon is caused because of the confirmation bias. Maybe It's impossible to avoid making the confirmation bias. But with this progress we can't eradicate the crimes. Contrary to our beliefs, They are same with us. We just want to deny the truth, which the potential that we could be the criminals. Second, Unlike our thought, There are many reasons they do the crime. One of the reasons is the financial problem according to the Lee hyung-yuk(Korea police university president). They do the crime to live their life. Final reason reason is the discrimination for them. Their youth memory is filled with the child abuse and the bullying. The korea serial killer '유영철' is the example of this reason(We could see in the next research). He said that the teacher of his youth abused him with the curses that do not come to the school. But no one helped them and that makes them hostile for the world. However, if we helped them, this bad situation would not appear. This is all because of the indifference. As I say above, our fault is bigger than their personality. Like this, we couldn't say this is all because of them. We could help them. And the first step for helping them is admitting that they are same with us. After we admit, we could see them in an another sight. We all want the peaceful world. Of course, we couldn't make the peaceful world only by preventing the criminals. According to the psychologytoday.com, criminals also feel the guilty, So helping them for saving ourselves. 

My argument is already issued in the real world. And nowadays the actual way to prevent the crime is issued, too. This thesis can attract the audience and can help the real world.