2014년 10월 22일 수요일

The Narration.

My persuasive argument thesis is:
We can protect ourselves from the criminals by admitting that they are same with us.
1. What do people already know about my topic?
 Criminals: There would be no one who does not know the criminals. Criminals are one of the issued part of the world. Many famous crimes become the movie or drama. And also In the real world, the crime's rates are increasing, many people would concern about the criminals.

 Mind of the criminals: Maybe no one know their mind, because no one tries to know their mind and consider as the psychos. 

2. What research has already been done about my topic?
I found the meaning of the scared and frightened to know the feelings of the victims. And also find the Lee young-hyeok(경찰 university president)'s saying that the prime reason of criminal is the financial problem. I already read the /www.psychologytoday.com/blog/inside-the-criminal-mind/201410/crime-may-not-be-product-criminal-mind to know the criminal mind and also read the




3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I’m right? What if I’m right and people ignore me?)
Many people think i'm wrong with this thesis. But I'm right and I insist this thesis with the logical reasons. Many people would ignore my thesis because they don't want to be regarded as the same people with the criminals.Yes, it could be wrong as they say that the criminals are the psychos. Many victims feel the scared and frightened when they meet the criminals. The reason why we get the scared and the frightened is because of the prejudice. And this prejudice makes people be in the confirmation bias. However, we could be out in this confirmation bias by admitting that they are same with us and this process can help the criminals do not do the crime. 

Narration.
 There would be no one who does not know the criminals which are one of the issued part of the world. Many famous crimes become the movie or drama. And also in the real world, the crime's rates are increasing, many people would concern about the criminals. Because of this state of a society, many articles and experts indicate their opinions. As one of the experts, I read the Lee young-hyeok(Korea police university's professor)'s article and quote his mention. He said that the criminals do the crime because of the financial problem. It's different with the normal people's bias. And also the psychologytoday(a bi-monthly magazine published in the United States) indicates that the susceptibility is caused because of the prejudice. And the criminal's mind is also filled with the guilty and the frightened.

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