Rewritten Conclusion.

Rewritten Conclusion

 I was very cautious to select my argument. But to know the criminal mind was my dream in the past, and also dream the peaceful world that do not have any crimes. So I select the argument  'We can protect ourselves from the criminals by admitting that they are same with us'. I insist this argument because of the confirmation bias, prejudice and the social indifference. We just justify them as the psychos.However It's our thought, we justify them as the psychos at will. And there is the ridiculous prejudice that the criminals do the crime to enjoy the crime itself. But as we see above, the most major reason is the financial problem according to the Lee hyung-yuk professor. And as we could see in the korea serial killer '유영철' the social indifference makes them more hostile for the world. So with these logical reasons, we have to admit that they are same with us. It doesn't mean that we have to admit recklessly. We can understand their background information and help them. We can give a big help for them and this first step would make us understand the criminals naturally. This admitting helps the criminals to stop the crime and the world will be peaceful and we could protect ourselves from the criminals and the crimes.