1) My argument
: I want to argue that we could protect ourselves from the criminals by finding the feelings of us when we face the criminals. Someone says that the criminals are the psychos who cannot be predicted. But we could find it. By following the profiler's reports we can know that they are just same with us. So I think if we can find the criminal's mind, we could know the way to protect ourselves from the criminals.
2) How I found my argument
:As I say in the research proposal, I has been interested in the human mind, especially for the victims and the criminals. Actually My first dream was the profiler, but I think it is practically hard to achieve, I fold it. But when I see this persuasive essay, I think I could continue my ex-dream. The reason why i choose my dream as a profiler is that by finding the criminal's mentality, we could prevent the crimes and we could achieve the peaceful world. And also in our real world, because of the increasing interest about the crimes, this argument would be helpful.
3) New research questions
:I think more research is needed.
a) What's the reason the criminals behave crimes?
:I think we need the interview from the criminals
a) What's the reason from their interview?
4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler
:We could connect this argument to the human mind. The victims and the criminals' mind is related to the human mind, and thoughts of the normal people are especially related to the confirmation bias, because they think criminals are psychos.
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