1.What score do you think you deserve?
-I think i would deserve the 1 point.(Too least researchs, 1st draft was based on my thought.)
2.What did you do well?
-I choose the intersting topic that can show my interests. And I show my thoughts about the topic.
Also, with my topic, I use the sure researchs such as the experts' mention, and the statistics.
3.What could you have done better?
-I thick I could have done the research part better. I use the too least researches. But, actually It was my first draft, so I could't assure what to find to help my first draft. Also, exact understanding doesn't follow. I would have to do better in the research part.
4.Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
-I think the articulation part was the best, because with this process, I could reestablish my thoughts, opinions, and connection between the topic and the researches.
5.Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
-I think all of my researches were the most poor. Actually it's hard to find the exact connection between the my researches and the topic. And the researches were inherent.
6.What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
-I have to add more credible research, actually my first draft was based on my opinion. I will find more adequate researchs that can be applied for my draft.
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